Lord Eagleton
Bencher
From an article about the Storm and Broncos on news.com.au. Tell me, whats wrong with this opening paragraph?
''A SALARY cap probe finishes in mysterious circumstances, Anthony Griffin’s sacking opens the way for the return of the Supercoach, Ben Barba battles, and the greatest team of the last decade falls flat in the finals.''
Please direct all comments to Fox Sports 'journalist' Ben Glover.
''A SALARY cap probe finishes in mysterious circumstances, Anthony Griffin’s sacking opens the way for the return of the Supercoach, Ben Barba battles, and the greatest team of the last decade falls flat in the finals.''
Please direct all comments to Fox Sports 'journalist' Ben Glover.